Marina Ortega_Tier 4_Island correction

I hesitated and changed my mind too many times with this one. I did further changes apart the suggested on the feedback to enhance the focal point. I think I'm happier now, but this one was one of these were you don't know anything anymore of what you like, who you are, what year is it, hehe. So I guess this is the final, but I wouldn't say it out loud.

Thanks again for the last feedback :)

TIER 4 FEEDBACKS

DANIEL



MARINA



MAURO





ROBERT



TIM



YOHAN

ARTWORK FEEDBACK DATE

Hello Students!

Student feedback for submitted works will be posted this coming Monday, February 1st, 2016.

Again, thank you all for the support!

-James

Robert Ryminiecki Tier 4

Hi James,

My artwork for Tier 4 from December:

Once again sorry for the trouble and thanks for the session!
Robert Ryminiecki

Tim Begent - Tier 4

Thanks for all the great advice James - look forward to your thoughts. Cheers!

Australian Outback Scene

Hatchery concept - "Brave New World"

Daniel Pollok - Tier 4

Hi James,

as you suggested, I painted an action pose of my last character with some design changes.
I hope you can give me some hints on how to improve it further.

Marina Ortega_Patreon Tier Group 4

Hi James!

Thank you very much for the last critique on my swamp, it was really useful and I incorporated it to my final piece. I hope you can help me with this island land too. As said before, I'm practicing some MTG style lands because I love it, and working for them is one of my goals this year.

It still being a wip, this needs more detail. My idea was to have a background kind of muddy and misty, but we have a clearing in the foreground. Water is key in islands, and it is not my main strenght, so if among your pieces of advice you can help me to make my water pop out, and tell me if I'm failing in any fundamentals here, it would be awesome.

Thanks beforehand, I'm really looking forward to your feedback!

Yohan Huhner, TIER Group 4

Hi James , first of all thank you for your critique on my work from last month and have a happy new year 2016,
here's my submission for january , i tried to apply what you said and to keep my focus point the more contrasted part of my picture, tried to lead the eye through the composition the best i could with shapes and lights...
I stayed in my comfort zone to apply all that stuffs , next month i'll try something new, (architectural stuff probably, i'm really struggling with shape/ design / scale and perspective , and i dont wan't to use 3d or photo bashing, i first want to be able to figure what i want with brushstrokes ...) ...
Ps : this time i upload my image at full res ...

Mauro Franco, Patreon Tier Group #4

Hey James,

Here are my submissions :)

Thank you for the critiques :)

WELCOME!

Hello Everyone,

And welcome to the January session of TIER 4 Critique!!! We ask you to post your work here for review, and we have just a few notes for you:

- In the title, please include your First & Last Name, & Patreon Tier Group #
- Please only submit the maximum allowed pieces, depending on your tier group.
- Please submit all work no later than: 11:59pm January 10th 2016, Pacific Time

Thank you again, and we're really looking forward to the group!

Thanks!!