tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25368309745013997992024-03-20T18:10:43.880-07:00CRITIQUE TIER 4 GROUP - JANUARY SESSIONJames Paickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02009730238564424220noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2536830974501399799.post-70702632687395118822016-02-09T05:55:00.004-08:002016-02-09T05:55:52.425-08:00Marina Ortega_Tier 4_Island correction<a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj4Du9aCMEtEe-4q_xHJkOjr3Ma13mJEEtkZToO93XeS5n677ORr5BQgc4WRBLYCBYssVD9mUamIog7mJL5yJS2w3k-G2XcESVhOROvmQAG-bQWf8rDg-7onBbY7IPAj1_f5G2JA8TYn9c/s1600/island1cardsize_www.artofmarinaortega.com_MarinaOrtega.jpg" imageanchor="1"><img border="0" height="485" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj4Du9aCMEtEe-4q_xHJkOjr3Ma13mJEEtkZToO93XeS5n677ORr5BQgc4WRBLYCBYssVD9mUamIog7mJL5yJS2w3k-G2XcESVhOROvmQAG-bQWf8rDg-7onBbY7IPAj1_f5G2JA8TYn9c/s640/island1cardsize_www.artofmarinaortega.com_MarinaOrtega.jpg" width="640" /></a><br />
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I hesitated and changed my mind too many times with this one. I did further changes apart the suggested on the feedback to enhance the focal point. I think I'm happier now, but this one was one of these were you don't know anything anymore of what you like, who you are, what year is it, hehe. So I guess this is the final, but I wouldn't say it out loud.<br />
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Thanks again for the last feedback :)Marina Ortegahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13035624012858785843noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2536830974501399799.post-17104348277918939872016-02-02T09:26:00.004-08:002016-02-02T09:26:58.864-08:00TIER 4 FEEDBACKS DANIEL<br />
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Student feedback for submitted works will be posted this coming Monday, February 1st, 2016. <br /><br />
Again, thank you all for the support! <br /><br />
-James<br />James Paickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02009730238564424220noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2536830974501399799.post-53973447206877634122016-01-14T11:59:00.002-08:002016-01-14T11:59:49.917-08:00Robert Ryminiecki Tier 4Hi James,<br />
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My artwork for Tier 4 from December:<br />
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Once again sorry for the trouble and thanks for the session!<br />
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Kattsenghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01931867260513920083noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2536830974501399799.post-45512845771160994002016-01-10T13:31:00.002-08:002016-01-10T13:31:44.482-08:00Daniel Pollok - Tier 4Hi James,<br />
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as you suggested, I painted an action pose of my last character with some design changes.<br />
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Hi James!<br />
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Thank you very much for the last critique on my swamp, it was really useful and I incorporated it to my final piece. I hope you can help me with this island land too. As said before, I'm practicing some MTG style lands because I love it, and working for them is one of my goals this year.<br />
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It still being a wip, this needs more detail. My idea was to have a background kind of muddy and misty, but we have a clearing in the foreground. Water is key in islands, and it is not my main strenght, so if among your pieces of advice you can help me to make my water pop out, and tell me if I'm failing in any fundamentals here, it would be awesome.<br />
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Thanks beforehand, I'm really looking forward to your feedback!<br />
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Hi James , first of all thank you for your critique on my work from last month and have a happy new year 2016,<br />
here's my submission for january , i tried to apply what you said and to keep my focus point the more contrasted part of my picture, tried to lead the eye through the composition the best i could with shapes and lights...<br />
I stayed in my comfort zone to apply all that stuffs , next month i'll try something new, (architectural stuff probably, i'm really struggling with shape/ design / scale and perspective , and i dont wan't to use 3d or photo bashing, i first want to be able to figure what i want with brushstrokes ...) ...<br />
Ps : this time i upload my image at full res ...<br />
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Thank you for the critiques :)Mauro Francohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07721962513815312550noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2536830974501399799.post-60132289197728871732016-01-06T16:51:00.001-08:002016-01-06T16:51:17.257-08:00WELCOME! Hello Everyone,<br />
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And welcome to the January session of TIER 4 Critique!!! We ask you to post
your work here for review, and we have just a few notes for you:<br />
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- In the title, please include your First & Last Name, & Patreon Tier Group #<br />
- Please only submit the maximum allowed pieces, depending on your tier group.<br />
- Please submit all work no later than: 11:59pm January 10th 2016, Pacific Time<br />
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Thank you again, and we're really looking forward to the group!<br />
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Thanks!!
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